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(Poetry) ์„์–‘ | Sunset

  

๐ŸŒ  Summary

 

This post presents an original Korean sunset poem reflecting on the quiet transition from daylight to dawn.

The poem explores renewal, natural cycles, dusk light, and contemplative beauty.


 

Sunset image for rest
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๐Ÿ“œ Original Korean Poem

 

ํ•œ ๋‚ฎ์˜ ๊ด‘์˜

๋„“๊ฒŒ ํŽผ์น˜๊ณ 

 

์ด์ œ

๋– ๋‚˜๊ฐˆ ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ๋‹ค๊ฐ€์˜ค๋„ค

 

๊ฑด๋ฌผ ๋„ˆ๋จธ

์ € ๋ฉ€๋ฆฌ ์‚ฐ ๋„˜์–ด

 

๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„๊นŒ์ง€

๋น›์„ ๋ฐํ˜€

์•„๋ฆ„๋‹ค์šด ๋ชจ์Šต ๋ณด์ด๊ณ 

 

์ž ์‹œ

์‰ฌ์—ˆ๋‹ค๊ฐ€

 

์ƒˆ๋ฒฝ๋…˜

์—ฌ๋ช…์œผ๋กœ ์ธ์‚ฌํ•˜๋ฆฌ๋‹ˆ

 

 

Condensed English Version

 

The sun spreads its bright noon light wide,

then quietly approaches its departure.

 

Beyond buildings and far-off hills,

it holds its final glow

a moment of stillness

before greeting the world again

with the first soft breath of dawn.

 

 

๐Ÿ–‹ Wirter's Comment 

  

์ด ์‹œ๋Š” ํ•˜๋ฃจ์˜ ๋์—์„œ ์‹œ์ž‘๋˜๋Š” ๊ณ ์š”ํ•œ ์ „ํ™˜์˜ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‹ด์•„๋ƒˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ €๋ฌด๋Š” ๋น›์ด ์‚ฌ๋ผ์ง€๋Š” ๋“ฏ ๋ณด์—ฌ๋„, ๊ทธ ์†์—๋Š” ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋Œ์•„์˜ฌ ๋น›์˜ ์•ฝ์†์ด ๋‚ด์žฌ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ž์—ฐ์˜ ์ˆœํ™˜๊ณผ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ํœด์‹์„ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋А๋‚„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ํ๋ฆ„์œผ๋กœ ๊ตฌ์„ฑํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

 

 

๐ŸŒฟ Appreciation Points

 

1. ๋น›์˜ ์ˆœํ™˜์„ฑ๊ณผ ์น˜์œ ๊ฐ

 

์‹œ๋Š” ํƒœ์–‘ ๋น›์˜ ์ˆœํ™˜์„ ์ค‘์‹ฌ์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋ฃจ์˜ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋‹ด๋‹ดํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๊ด‘์˜ ํ‡ด์žฅ ์—ฌ๋ช…์œผ๋กœ ์ด์–ด์ง€๋Š” ์ž์—ฐ์˜ ์งˆ์„œ๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋ณต๋˜๋Š” ์ผ์ƒ ์†์—์„œ๋„ ํšŒ๋ณต๊ณผ ์•ˆ์ •์˜ ๋ฆฌ๋“ฌ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํŠนํžˆ ์ผ๋ชฐ(sunset imagery)์ด ์ฃผ๋Š” ๋”ฐ์Šคํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ถ€๋“œ๋Ÿฌ์šด ์ •์„œ๋Š” ํ•˜๋ฃจ์˜ ๋์— ๋งˆ์Œ์„ ๋‚ด๋ ค๋†“๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ •ํ™”์˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

 

2. ๊ณต๊ฐ„์„ ํ™•์žฅ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ์‹œ์  ์‹œ์„ 

 

๊ฑด๋ฌผ ๋„ˆ๋จธ, ์‚ฐ ๋„ˆ๋จธ๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ๋„์‹œ์  ์‹œ์•ผ๋ฅผ ๋„˜์–ด์„œ ์ž์—ฐ์˜ ๊นŠ์ด๋กœ ์‹œ์„ ์„ ์ด๋™์‹œํ‚ค๋ฉฐ, ํ˜„๋Œ€ ์ƒํ™œ(morden life) ์†์—์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋†“์น˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ž์—ฐ์˜ ์ˆจ๊ฒฐ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋А๋ผ๊ฒŒ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๊ด€์ ์˜ ํ™•์žฅ์€ ์ผ๋ชฐ ํ…Œ๋งˆ ์‹œ(sunset-themed poetry) ํŠน์œ ์˜ ํ•˜๋ฃจ๊ฐ€ ์‚ฌ๋ผ์ง€๋Š” ์ˆœ๊ฐ„์˜ ์›€์ง์ž„์„ ๋”์šฑ ๋‹๋ณด์ด๊ฒŒ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

 

3. ์ •์ ๊ณผ ์žฌํƒ„์ƒ์˜ ๋Œ€๋น„

 

์ž ์‹œ ์‰ฌ์—ˆ๋‹ค๊ฐ€๋Š” ํ•˜๋ฃจ์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์— ์ฐพ์•„์˜ค๋Š” ์ •์ ์˜ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ ์ฃผ๊ณ ,

์ด์–ด์ง€๋Š” ์—ฌ๋ช…์œผ๋กœ ์ธ์‚ฌํ•˜๋ฆฌ๋‹ˆ๋Š” ์ƒˆ๋ฒฝ ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€ (dawn imagery)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‹œ์ž‘์˜ ์—๋„ˆ์ง€๋ฅผ ์˜ˆ๊ณ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ •์ ๊ณผ ์žฌํƒ„์ƒ์ด ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ด์–ด์ง€๋Š” ์ด ๋Œ€๋น„๋Š” ์‚ถ์˜ ์ˆœํ™˜์„ฑ๊ณผ ํ•˜๋ฃจ์˜ ์˜๋ฏธ๋ฅผ ๋” ๊นŠ์ด ๋А๋ผ๊ฒŒ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

 

๐Ÿ” Themes & Keywords

This post highlights themes of sunset reflection, natural cycles, dawn renewal, and the calming emotional shift between dusk and morning light.

 

 

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